From Angel to A-Dawg

I've written a Maximum Ride Fanfiction with Jamie Dominy, and I'd like some feedback on it. There are also some grammar, punctuation, and spelling mistakes, since Jamie isn't exactly a grammar Nazi, and sometimes I'm too busy writing to fix all the mistakes. It'd be great if you guys read, comment, tell me what's wrong, and such. Thanks!


Currently, I've got this story on three different sites, so depending on what format you like reading most, you've got choices! Only the one on Wikia is complete, but the one on is pretty darn close. Sadly, the one on WattPad is still a bit behind.